Books with Hooks Feedback June 13, 2024

For the episode featuring author, Jackie Kalillieh

Jun 13, 2024

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This week Carly and CeCe critique two upmarket submissions, one of which is in the gothic genre! Take a look at their notes below to see their thoughts on avoiding performative dialogue, the need for interiority, being mindful about word choice, and so much more!

💖 TSNOTYAW Team