Books with Hooks Feedback June 6, 2024

For the episode featuring author, Annabel Monaghan

This week Carly and CeCe critique a resubmission and a sci-fi query along with input from guest agent, Mary C. Moore, which means you have six critiques to learn from! Take a look at their notes below to see their thoughts on the balancing act of trying to write a cross-over novel, always being mindful of your writing at a line-level, highlighting why y…