Books with Hooks Feedback May 23, 2024

For the Samuel Burr episode

May 23, 2024

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This week Carly and CeCe critiqued a YA submission, and a literary, coming-of-age horror. Take a look at their notes below to see their thoughts on repetitive language, the concept of scene work, pitching literary fiction, and more!

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Cece Katherine Hill

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Carly Katherine Hill (2)

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